Businessman Loses All Hope After His Diagnosis, but One Hospital Encounter Changes Everything — Story of the Day
December 02, 2024
My girlfriend and I were happy—at least, I thought we were. Then, overnight, everything changed. A message. A warning to stay away. No explanation. Just silence. But something felt wrong. The more I searched for answers, the more I realized the truth was far worse than I ever imagined.
I was sitting in the park, waiting for my girlfriend, Rachel. We had been together for almost two years. I considered it a serious relationship, but I wasn’t sure if she felt the same way.
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The thing was, I had only seen her father, Andrew, once—and even then, just in passing. He owned a small hotel where he and Rachel lived.
I had spoken to him only once when I came to pick Rachel up for a date. He stood at the reception desk, glaring at me like I had no right to be there.
"Do you think you should be dating boys?" I overheard him ask Rachel.
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"Dad, I’m 24," she replied, her voice firm.
"Stop this or…" His words trailed off as he noticed me listening. Our eyes met, and I quickly looked away.
That hadn’t been long ago. Even before that, Rachel had made one thing clear—I wasn’t welcome at the hotel.
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We had a great relationship—I loved her—but this situation bothered me. I had introduced her to my parents long ago.
She had even joined family dinners, laughing with my mom, talking to my dad.
I looked up and saw Rachel approaching. My face lit up. She reached me, her hair catching the sunlight, and leaned in, pressing a soft kiss to my lips.
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"How are you?" Rachel asked, her voice warm.
I looked at her, my smile fading. My heart pounded. I needed to say it, but the words felt heavy. "We need to talk," I said.
Rachel’s brow furrowed. "Talk about what?"
I hesitated, then met her eyes. "Do you take this relationship seriously? Us?"
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She blinked, looking almost offended. "Of course, I do. What kind of question is that?"
"Then why won’t you let me meet your father?" I asked.
Rachel let out a slow breath. "Ed, you’ve met him before."
"You know what I mean," I said. "Why can’t it be real? Why can’t I talk to him like your boyfriend, not some stranger?"
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Rachel crossed her arms. "I told you. My father's strict. Controlling. He won’t accept this."
"Is that the only reason?" I pressed.
Rachel softened. "Yes. Ed, I love you. I see my future with you."
I exhaled, then took her hand. "I love you too." I kissed her gently.
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Our date went well, and I came home happy. I lay in bed that night, replaying every moment.
The way Rachel laughed, the warmth in her eyes, the way she held my hand. It felt real. Solid. Like nothing could break us.
The next morning, I woke up expecting a Good morning text. Rachel always texted first—she woke up earlier than me. But my screen was empty.
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Maybe she was busy. I sent her a message. Morning, beautiful.
No reply.
An hour passed. Then two. Then three.
I texted again. Everything okay?
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Silence.
I tried calling. No answer.
By evening, my worry had turned into a deep, sinking feeling. My phone buzzed, and I grabbed it instantly.
Rachel.
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I exhaled in relief—until I read the message.
@Rachel
We need to stop talking.
My stomach twisted. Another message followed seconds later.
@Rachel
Never text or call me again. And don’t come to the hotel.
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I froze, staring at the words. My hands felt numb. I called her immediately. Straight to voicemail. I tried again. And again.
Nothing.
It made no sense. Just yesterday, we were happy. And now she was cutting me off? No reason. No explanation. Just… gone.
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For weeks, I was a mess. I barely ate, barely slept. I tried to move on, but everything reminded me of her.
The park where we met. The coffee shop where we sat for hours. Her favorite song playing on the radio.
One night, I decided to delete our entire chat history. Maybe that would help. I opened our messages and scrolled to the last ones.
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And then, something hit me.
The periods.
Rachel never used periods in texts. Ever. She told me once they felt cold, like an ending. This wasn’t her.
I thought back to our last date. "I love you, Ed, and I see my future with you."
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Why would she say that, only to leave me the next day? There was only one person who could have sent those messages. Her father.
I couldn’t ignore it. I needed answers. So, the next day, I went to the hotel. I tried to slip inside unnoticed, keeping my head down.
But then, I heard a sharp voice behind me. "What are you doing here?"
Andrew.
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"I want to talk to Rachel," I said, standing firm.
Andrew’s cold stare didn’t waver. "Rachel is gone. She’s not here."
My chest tightened. "What do you mean? Where did she go?"
"Abroad. She left to study," he said flatly.
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My heart pounded. "That doesn’t make sense. She never mentioned leaving."
Andrew stepped closer. "It’s not your concern anymore. Now, get out. If I see you here again, you’ll regret it."
His voice was sharp, final. But something felt wrong. As I turned toward the exit, a maid pushed a laundry cart past me.
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My eyes landed on something familiar—one of Rachel’s dresses. My stomach dropped.
If she had really left, why were her clothes still here? I followed the maid into the laundry room.
"Hi, I’m Ed. Rachel’s boyfriend," I said.
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The maid barely looked at me. "So?"
"I heard Rachel left—"
She cut me off. "Left? Honey, she hasn’t left this hotel in weeks."
My throat went dry. "Are you sure?"
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She raised an eyebrow. "Are you sure you’re really her boyfriend?"
I swallowed hard. "Sorry. Must be a mistake," I mumbled and hurried out.
This was getting stranger by the minute. My gut told me something was wrong. Her father had lied about her leaving. But why? Where was Rachel?
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I stayed hidden in the hotel lobby, watching Andrew. He stood behind the reception desk, flipping through paperwork, occasionally glancing at the entrance.
He was waiting for something—or someone. I forced myself to stay calm. I had to be smart.
Minutes passed. Then, finally, he stepped away, disappearing into the back office. My chance.
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Heart pounding, I rushed behind the desk and clicked through the security footage.
I scanned the past few days, searching for any sign of Rachel. Nothing. No checkouts. No exits.
Then I saw it. Andrew, carrying Rachel in his arms. She looked limp. Unconscious.
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My stomach twisted. He took her into a room. I zoomed in on the door number. 113.
A chill ran through me. I turned to the key wall. The key to Room 113 was missing. Suddenly, I heard footsteps. Andrew’s voice. Too close.
I backed away and slipped into the elevator, pressing the button for Rachel’s floor. My hands shook.
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The doors opened. I stepped out, my eyes locking onto the door labeled Room 113. A sign hung on it: Closed for renovation.
Lies.
I tried the handle. Locked. My mind raced. She was inside. She needed me.
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So, I did what any man in love would do when his girlfriend was in danger. I kicked the door open. The sight inside made my blood run cold.
Rachel lay on the bed, unmoving. Her skin was pale. A pile of medicine bottles sat on the nightstand.
A machine beside her tracked her pulse, beeping steadily. I rushed to her, gripping her hand.
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"Rachel!" I shook her gently. "Wake up!"
She didn’t move.
"Edwin, I warned you to stay out of this," Andrew’s voice came from behind me. His tone was sharp, firm.
I turned, my hands shaking. "What did you do to her?!" My voice broke. "She won’t wake up!"
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Andrew took a slow step forward. "What did I do?" His expression didn’t change. "I love my daughter more than anything in the world. Edwin… Rachel is sick."
"Then why is she like this?" I demanded. "Why isn’t she in the hospital?!"
Andrew exhaled sharply. "Because there’s nothing more they can do," he said. "The doctors can’t help her. She wanted to come home."
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I clenched my fists. "Then why didn’t she tell me? Why did she push me away?"
Andrew rubbed his forehead. His face looked tired. "I warned her," he said. "I told her not to be with you. It would only end in pain."
I swallowed hard. "I thought you just didn’t like me."
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Andrew’s shoulders dropped slightly. "I was trying to protect her," he said. "But she didn’t listen. She loved you. And in her last conscious days… she cried for you."
A lump formed in my throat. "What can I do?"
Andrew looked at me for a long moment. Then he shook his head. "There’s nothing you can do."
He reached into his pocket, hesitated, then pulled out a small envelope.
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"This is a letter Rachel asked me to give you… after…" He stopped, unable to finish. "I think you should have it now."
I took it with trembling hands. My name was written on the front in her handwriting. My vision blurred.
"Can I stay with her?" I asked. My voice barely came out.
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Andrew let out a long sigh, then gave a slow nod. Without another word, he turned and left the room.
I sat down next to Rachel, gripping her cold hand in mine. Her fingers didn’t move.
Her breathing was faint, barely noticeable. I swallowed the lump in my throat, my chest aching.
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With trembling hands, I opened the letter. My name was on the front, written in her handwriting. I traced the letters with my thumb before unfolding the paper.
Ed, my love. If you’re reading this, it means I’m gone. I know I hurt you when I told you we couldn’t talk anymore, but if you had to watch me fade away, it would’ve been even worse for both of us.
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I’m sorry for lying to you and keeping this from you. But the time I spent with you was the only time I felt normal. Healthy. I love you more than anything in this world. Until my last breath. Forever yours, Rachel.
Tears blurred my vision. I clutched her hand, pressing it to my forehead, my body shaking.
My Rachel.
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